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Title: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on September 22, 2007, 04:57:07 pm
Please add your haiku
they\'re FUN to create and share!
add poetry too!
 ;D

Bucketheadland

Wonderland of JOY
Conquers cruelty with FUN
[glb]Stay...Disembodied[/glb]


ISOT pt 1

Commander of strings
Buckethead ... In Search Of The
Creative genius
 
ISOT pt 2

Hours of black sharpies
magical musical strings
calling patiently?
 
bye bye sharpie (ISOT  relief)

Magical strings yearn
In search of the sharpie ends
Master has returned
 



 ;D


Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: buswolley on September 22, 2007, 10:16:19 pm
Those are much big fun.  I like the last one the most.  And, no I don't haiku.  It takes too much grey matter.  I'm very impressed.  Hopefully there is someone else out there in TDRS land that does.  My poetry doesn't do anything - no rhythm, no rhyme, nothing that actually requires any thought.

SPRING WILL OVER COME?

Running down the road
Metal in my ears
Pounding beat echoes
The path my foot fall takes
Long awaited rains
End months of draught
Nature celebrates its coming
Life explodes around me
Green with hope, spring erupts

A pin hole in the pavement
Captures my attention
Giving life to blooms
Finding animation
Through something so unmoving
I can't help but smile
Inspiring me to run
Nature always over coming

A low, dull, thudding
Off in the distance
An all too familiar sound
Thunderous pounding
Rattling inside my chest
Three Apache helicopters
Rising from the horizon

** huh **

I think I'll go lay down...


MEMORIAL DAY, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007

Celebrate the days five years in the making
Count the dead, twenty-nine laid to rest
Four thousand more numbered on days unimportant
No one keeps track of the names not American born

Soaked in the silence of a golden room
We call the day\'s names out loud
Feeling them one by one like bullets
We hold no commentary on these deaths
No politics, no borders, no religion
Those who have died of war are simply named
The business of noting every fall of a sparrow
Their lives bound up with ours

We rang out the names of those who died on 11 September
Sometimes it took hours, but we noted each one
Now the list exceeds those who died that bloody day
When do we read their names all at once
Registering the full impact one by one like bullets

Casualty of war defined as killed or injured
The number swells to thirty thousand
Keeping the numbers before us
Remembering each one has a name
Say their names out loud
The matter of recalling lives bound to ours
We keep count of those who are worth
More than many sparrows
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: gkg on September 23, 2007, 06:43:15 pm
bravo both of you.  i don\'t haiku = i actually never learned it in school... i probably changed schools just before the one was set to teach it and just after the other had or something.  i changed schools a LOT.
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on November 09, 2007, 04:03:17 pm
lone stump merky shore
ghostly mist of shadows roam
grip the oar...and row.
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: buswolley on November 10, 2007, 01:38:54 am
I like it
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: zintar on November 12, 2007, 02:19:51 am
Never tried me some Haiku ! Why not, here I go ....
 
 Master of String Arts
 Loaded with sounds from afar
 Pummel us with sound

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on November 12, 2007, 04:54:01 am
 ;D super!!

BIG HUGZ! ;D
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Chris DiCicco on November 14, 2007, 08:34:52 am
yes!

but modern esoteric stuff, to swishy for this post.

lots of befuddlement.

a numbered count from book came out to be 34 Haiku\'s...

Chris DiCicco
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on December 09, 2007, 01:32:40 am
awww come on...swishy and befuddle us at least once   ;)

BIG HUGZ!  ;D
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Chris DiCicco on December 10, 2007, 01:45:40 am
a\'right...

note: I may do a poetry reading CD and I may include these?

My zen like attitude... erhm some of them are real clear but others border on sayings starting with one of the clearer ones.

\'The Ocean and the Toilet are one of those things, you don\'t turn your back on too\'

\'Blue like Memory, akin to the walls of Hell in color\'

\'The Kids throw away wet dollars, what is this world coming to\'

\'Soul robbing rhythms, from a seat in the back room, the fire cooks food\'

\'Sometimes you have it, but sometimes your watch breaks\'

\'Forgive if (they) don\'t the art\'

o.k. if you are swished and befuddled, cheers, I\'ll take me own medicine from the last one.

Ya Dig?

Chris DiCicco
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on December 10, 2007, 06:33:16 pm
swished for sure ;) ...thank you Chris!
I enjoyed your haikus very much!  

Big HUGZ!  :D


Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: sngwthme on December 11, 2007, 07:21:47 am
What is a Haiku?
ZQ how about a definition for us.
I might Haiku and I don\'t even know it.  

Hey was that a Haiku?  hum.......
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on December 11, 2007, 07:30:59 am
haiku is fun  :D
basic principle
5-7-5 syllables in each line...

3 lines that\'s it  

BIG HUGZ!  ;D
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: sngwthme on December 11, 2007, 07:42:51 am
Falling on a cloud
Feels like a poke on my butt
could be my Ipod

 ;D ;D
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on December 11, 2007, 07:46:29 am
 :) haikus capture feelings and visuals....too!
you did it   ;)

BIG HUGZ!  ;D
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: sngwthme on December 11, 2007, 07:50:31 am
Woohoo! Sweet!!

Thanks!!
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: SAUCE on April 28, 2009, 08:12:05 am
bucketheads album
a real diamond in the rough
buy a.s.a.p


WOOT IT DEWT IT!!!
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on April 28, 2009, 09:43:55 am
^nice to revive this thread
 here is one for the person who started it  ;).......

Moonlight through the screen
Joyous Happy Cheerful words
Big Hugz make me Smile
  :)
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on April 28, 2009, 10:00:05 am
one more...

cold wind, hot dry sun
high spirit dawn, lonely dusk
life music death, dance.
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on April 28, 2009, 01:49:26 pm
 ;D beautiful...and thank you!! made my day...

BIGGEST HUGE HUGZ Duckhead!!!!  :-*
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on April 28, 2009, 03:00:08 pm
A Haiku happened to come to me today...  Sums up how I feel, but it sounds way worse than it is.

Violent tremors
Shake the deepest fibrous roots
And I am the Earth
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on April 29, 2009, 08:42:07 am
Quote
BIGGEST HUGE HUGZ Duckhead!!!!  :-*
Awwww ::) Shucks :) Twas Nuttn\' :P

QuoteA Haiku happened to come to me today...  Sums up how I feel, but it sounds way worse than it is.

Violent tremors
Shake the deepest fibrous roots
And I am the Earth

Sounds like an earthquake,  :o
For some reason it reminded me of one of my favorite Neil Young songs, this song envokes alot of emotion in me - I\'ll try to haiku it with some of it\'s lyrics...

I\'m an Accident
I\'m the Giant Undertow
I am the Ocean

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on April 29, 2009, 03:33:33 pm
You are all about making people\'s days in the Haiku thread Duckhead.  That I would remind anyone of Neil Young is the shiznit.

I really liked your haiku too.  It made me feel like an indian in the desert.

My haiku wasn\'t about an earthquake.  I don\'t want to freak anyone out.  It\'s about the responsibility that comes with knowledge and the changes that brings.
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on May 01, 2009, 11:50:23 pm
 ;D here you go Ella, to celebrate 1 year... totally cheesy but I think you\'ll like it.

Complete Colon Cleanse,
Poems, Art and Video.
...it\'s Elemental!
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on May 01, 2009, 11:58:50 pm
Quote;D here you go Ella, to celebrate 1 year... totally cheesy but I think you\'ll like it.

Complete Colon Cleanse,
Poems, Art and Video.
...it\'s Elemental!

that\'s rock\'n Duckhead
haiku mastery
must be in your blood
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ZQ on May 03, 2009, 12:02:43 am
Quote;D here you go Ella, to celebrate 1 year... totally cheesy but I think you\'ll like it.

Complete Colon Cleanse,
Poems, Art and Video.
...it\'s Elemental!


 ;D AWESOME Duckhead! (http://www.websmileys.com/sm/cool/1237.gif)

Big HUGZ!  :-*
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on May 04, 2009, 02:40:19 am
My teeth are dripping
Wet with desire to bite
A bolt of lightning
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: polishbucket on May 05, 2009, 06:10:50 pm
be disembodied
live freedom today for you
cos all can be you
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on May 08, 2009, 02:24:00 pm
I\'ll be the snake and
You be the tree and we can
Tempt Adam and Eve
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on May 12, 2009, 12:18:41 am
uuughh.... been sick last week, this is overdue.

those kindly bot words
Ella, Nuff Said and ZQ,
make me feel groovy
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on May 15, 2009, 07:33:17 pm
QuoteMy teeth are dripping
Wet with desire to bite
A bolt of lightning


reminds me of http://www.mandiapple.com/snowblood/ed80000v.htm

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on May 15, 2009, 07:34:27 pm


Buckethead inspires
vibrations of love and light
with his creations


Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on May 16, 2009, 11:48:43 pm
Quote

Buckethead inspires
vibrations of love and light
with his creations



that\'s freakin\' awesome
give it up for love and light
and the darkness too

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8rTUxtSMRo
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on May 17, 2009, 06:17:18 pm



your feelings are your
ticket to ride multi    
dimensional realities

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on July 26, 2009, 07:56:10 pm
I visited hell
But I didn\'t know what I
Was getting into
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on September 03, 2009, 12:30:58 am


Goddess grown garden
is dedicated to you
with love for all things

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on January 05, 2010, 11:13:14 am
I miss this thread... here's a couple for 2010

Life, Hope, Dreams and Year
Open Arms for Peace and Love
Newness in the Air

(http://www.landsedgephoto.com/Wellfleetpagefiles/SunsetDuckCreek.jpg)

Eyes Open Spirit Free
Breaking Away from the Flock
Gliding Through the Blue
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on February 10, 2010, 04:39:58 pm



Buckethead\'s music
floating in the Multiverse
hangs there in The Bliss

Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on February 20, 2010, 11:28:20 am
hold on oh so tight
hands and strings on guitar white
head filled with delight
 
motion and moving
magic, blood and bones tuning
my spirit grooving
 
robo chickens peck
round my spine and up my neck
relays are in check
 
dancing with the dead
dome and crown are splattered red
death...... by buckethead
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: nuff_said on February 20, 2010, 04:16:14 pm
those are great DH!!
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: ella_mental on February 20, 2010, 05:00:00 pm
Quotethose are great DH!!

+1

That\'s the first time I\'ve used that internet trend.  I feel hip now.
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on February 20, 2010, 05:35:43 pm
^^ Thanks u 2, :P
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Octopus Guy on April 04, 2010, 04:17:05 am
Chickens in the street
Pecking at Slipdisc\'s black feet
"I\'ll get you for this!"

I really don\'t know. I usually do well at haikus but it\'s 5 in the morning.  :-/
Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Duckhead on January 24, 2012, 06:23:48 pm
#520

It happened to me not so long ago
I got a glimpse of the Buckethead show
Filling me full of surprise and awe
I'll never forget what I heard or saw

Then I got to searching around
And found this place tucked underground
It felt fresh and it felt good
A couple of posts to make, I would

And people really read what I said
And made me feel like a decapitated head
Happy, joyful and full of BIG HUGZ
This place is "da best" just like good drugs

Stumpy is my rhyming bud
I hear he is quite the studly stud
He knows how to have fun and play
Rhyming rhymes all night and day

Lots of cool links and video
Some just make my feeble mind blow
They come from the caverns of one bots head
And all I can say is... nuff said

MTZ, Lefty and Ele too
Some swell artisits if I must tell you
Do yourself a favor you see
Purchase some art from one of those 3

Chris, what's up? And where's Egg and Zintar?
They's some cool cat musicians by far
Sling that Slaw my Star Wars pal
Not forget you, I shall

But one awesome dude I can't forget
I doubt he ever breaks a sweat
The guru, the leader of the TDRS tribe
It's the TD-man, the bro with rocking vibe

All the others that have left or stayed
We're all drawn here by B's serenade
I've been dismembered part by part
And the music will always be in my heart

When I get the chance I'll shake your hand
Next time we meet in bucketheadland
So now I have only one thing to do
Leave you with a final haiku...

A Transformation
The Sun, Moon, Water and Sky
Time for Duck to fly


Title: Re: Do you Haiku?  
Post by: Travis on January 24, 2012, 07:34:26 pm
The grass stands proud
I must pass through
both of us will find the sky again